I think what you typed was actually very logical. However, think on this, what if you added a little information? I am not suggesting your content is not solid., but what if you added a headline to possibly get folk's attention? I mean Progress 4GL is a little vanilla. You might glance at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create news titles to get people interested. You might add a video or a related pic or two to get readers excited about what you've written. Just my opinion, it could make your posts a little bit more interesting.
